Monday, June 13, 2011

First Page Critiques

Over at Unicorn Bell, they're having a First Page Critique session.  Submit the first 250 words of your story by June 14 by 5:00 pm, CST.

Huntress is running this critique session.


Ellie Garratt said...

Any news yet?

Mark Murata said...

Yes, thank you for asking. It's posted at

and has 5 critiques. (In my defense, the words "Try harder" were italicized in my submission, and that feature was lost in transmission.

Although Shushan is a young character, this novel manuscript is not actually young adult. I try to prevent confusion by having the first part with Shushan broken off as a prologue, though we see her again in the story.


Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...