Several years ago, I attended a writers’ workshop by the
great Terry Brooks. As an aside, do you know he pronounces Shannara with a
short a at the start, instead of an a like in father? It shocked a lot of
people. But I digress.
He stressed that every chapter should end with a cliffhanger
ending. “No exceptions,” he said. As a young aspiring writer, I thought that sounded
cliché. Now that I’m an older aspiring writer, I see the wisdom of it. Which
brings me to the manuscript I’m about to send out.
This picture I took was from much later
Not perfectly focused, I know
So this is from my War of the Wars reimagined. It you’re
reading this from a home computer, you can find links to excerpts in the column
on the right, or if you’re reading this from a smartphone, you can scroll down
to the tiny words that say “View web version” and see that column. My working
title will be Fairy War. Here is the cliffhanger ending for a chapter:
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My senses were overwhelmed as I lay there, head lolling on hard wood, and
I could not differentiate between the steam and smoke obscuring my vision when
I blacked out.
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How’d I do?