Monday, June 13, 2011

First Page Critiques

Over at Unicorn Bell, they're having a First Page Critique session.  Submit the first 250 words of your story by June 14 by 5:00 pm, CST.


Huntress is running this critique session.
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2 comments:

  1. Ellie GarrattJune 20, 2011 at 5:47 AM

    Any news yet?

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  2. Mark MurataJune 20, 2011 at 8:53 PM

    Yes, thank you for asking. It's posted at

    http://unicornbell.blogspot.com/2011/06/3-day-10k.html#comments

    and has 5 critiques. (In my defense, the words "Try harder" were italicized in my submission, and that feature was lost in transmission.

    Although Shushan is a young character, this novel manuscript is not actually young adult. I try to prevent confusion by having the first part with Shushan broken off as a prologue, though we see her again in the story.

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